9:19 AM: earlier this morning, i used my fresh energy to make further modifications to 6/28x26 drawing/collage. i collaged several pieces of paper upon which i had made some marks with 2 of my fountain pens, resulting in a more simplified composition which reads very well from a distance. it now seems resolved ; the two of us will look at it during the day and determine if it feels resolved or more is required.
2 PM: added the figure of a paddler