2:03 PM: i simplified the area above the head of the musician in musician & runner, which had been distracting from the composition as a whole.
BELOW: before (left) and after the changes i made today
12:57 PM: as i looked at the musician over the past few days, i felt the female figure to the left of the musician needed some work, so i made some changes this morning which i think did improve that figure and the entire composition.
BELOW: the musician before (left) and after today’s tweaks
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