8/11/25 collage, 12x14” on bristol, as it looked following this morning’s tweaks
1:08 PM: yesterdays tweaks to 8/11/2025 collage still wasn’t doing it for me, so i continued work this morning. the red top on the female figure to the right seemed too dominant, the face on the right too distracting and the area to he left too busy. so now, from about 18 feet, it seems more coherent as a composition, and less descriptive.
BELOW: yesterdays version is on the left
3:33 PM: after tweaking the 8/11/25 collage, i made 8/13/25 collage, which is 8 1/4 x 4 3/4” and is complete.
8/13/25 collage, 8 1/4 x 4 3/4”