1:15 PM: i'll be out of the studio until 10/5, so the changes i see are definitely necessary won't be made till then. my experience has been taking a one week break gives me a fresh perspective, which will reflect in the trajectory of gaze 33. as with it's predecessor, gaze 32, there's no shortcut to resolution.
one of issues you see here is lack of integration of foreground with background. but more than that, this painting simply hasn't yet found it's identity.