parade 39 tweaks/about my abstract collages / by Philip Tarlow

2:49 update: PARADE 39 RESOLVED? i'll know better tomorrow morning when i enter the studio. i may lighten the blue jacket on the upper left; now that everything else has been so finely tuned, it stands out a bit too much as i scan the painting from across the room. aside form that, i feel like i've done good work today, and that parade 39 now sings! i especially love the detail below, on row 2, right. a language....a shorthand is evolving that balances abstract form with representational specifics.

parade 39  32x78" at the end of my work day today. it may be complete; i'll know in the morning.

parade 39 as it looked before starting work on it

12:13pm update: in reviewing parade 39, i feel it's too busy. so i'm going to work on that, without, i hope, doing anything stupid that ruins it!

 

 

 

11:31update: this is the first page of a document containing a selection of 30 of my abstract collages. to see more, go to recent collages, under the works menu bar.

10:09 am update: late. it's late to be making the second thermos. clear sky, not blustery silent, here in the baca. just the persistent ringing in my ear, like a call to battle.

but there is no battle.