more work on roiling / by Philip Tarlow

4:40 PM: and one more thing. i took out some of the red, which was overwhelming the composition. i'll see how it looks in the morning.

4:15 PM: BELOW: and a few more changes, including the introduction of red marks into the roiling composition. 

3:17 PM: roiling looked too busy, so i decided to work into it. it's still too busy, so maybe i'll continue work tomorrow. BELOW: yesterday (left) and today (right)

the introduction of pink has warmed up the entire composition, but she's still not sure yet who she is, sending us somewhat mixed messages.