a minor tweak to motion 14 / by Philip Tarlow

11:36 AM:upon entering my studio, motion 14 looked resolved. not only resolved, but in an interesting and new way, compared with the previous paintings in the series. i called mikela over for an opinion and she fully agreed, except for one area on the mid-right, which she felt needed something in that area of the composition to keep it from creating the appearance of straight line. 

if you click on the left image below to make it full screen, then click right to move to the tweaked painting, i think you'll see just how important that small change was to the entire composition.

so now, on to motion 16, for which i'm about to stretch the canvas.

                            before tweak                                                        after tweak