1/31/14 stages 1, 2, 3 and 4 of 1/30/14 collage #2 / by Philip Tarlow

this morning i looked at yesterday's collage #2 and it seemed busy. there were passages i liked a lot, but on the whole, it just didn't work. so this is it's current state. aside from the watch references i've mentioned in previous blogs, if you look carefully just under my signature, you'll see a fragment of miley's tongue just under "castle peak gate" on the map fragment.

5 pm: just made more change:

in chronological order: stage 1:upper left, stage 2: upper right, stage 3:lower left current stage 4: lower right

which do you prefer of the 4 stages. and why? responses to: tarlowart@gmail.com